Friday 31 August 2018

Planets description.

The avatars are tall,blue-eye,purple spots on them, dangerous, and have weapons and arrows carried with them.The people on Pandora are terrified of darkness, because when they go into darkness they will burn up.Pandora is unlike from earth because Pandora have trees and have animals that are powerful and also have bright mint green grass.In Pandora they have floating planets everywhere.Floating planets in Pandora are rocky, high, and also have good smells.Waters at Pandora was clear and aqua blue, and also there are houses that looks like there haunted.The satellite shined above us.I saw floating planets like birds flying in the sky. The water was clear as glass as it flowed down the deep waterfall. 

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